Jessica felt the heft of the blade in her hand, pleased with the balance. She stashed it in the leather sheath strapped to her thigh, in plain view. Her act of defiance marked her as a hunter, not one of the sheep. The promise of a confrontation hung in the air. Good. Bring it on.
Tales of the Overlords filled her bedtime stories as a child, living in the communes, raised by the sheep. She’d lost her parents as a babe during those months of conflict, twenty years ago. The swaths of destruction in the city beyond lay fallow, silent graveyards attesting to the absolute power of the diabolical soldiers. The bleats of mourning for missed conveniences had been her education about the world of yesterday. Let them lament what they’d lost; it had been their world, not hers.
The raiders had left enough infrastructure in place to subsist in a rudimentary fashion, even improving it on some levels, from what she’d been told. No one wanted for food or clothing. And if they were forced to reside in groups, what of it? Jessica didn’t see the allure of living by oneself. The old ones were crazy anyway, wanting what they no longer had.
A few of the Overlords remained, determined to hold that which they’d so brutally taken. Their two species were quite similar; at a glance, the Overlords could blend in well. What set them apart were the uniforms they were so fond of wearing. That attitude of superiority sparked a budding hatred in Jessica as she grew up, convincing her to become a hunter.
The assholes could be killed, just as any mortal man. A swift plunge of steel in a well-chosen spot would silence the organs that kept them breathing. Only death would stop the advance of their tyranny. Let the sheep huddle in the safety of their comfortable cages. She, and other hunters like her, would liberate the planet…or die trying.
Stealth brought Jessica up behind a lone Overlord, taking his ease in the sunshine behind a building…sunshine forbidden to the sheep, because of the anti-congregation laws. She withdrew her blade with the slightest whisper of sound, the snick of leather just loud enough for a casual turn in her direction. The thrust held true, his eyes widened then closed forever.
Jessica pocketed his uniform patch to add to her growing collection of souvenirs. Perhaps she wouldn’t kill the next one as quickly, have a conversation with him instead. She’d been wondering for some time now as to where their home world was located and what ‘United Federation of Earth’ meant.
Nice twist :c)
ReplyDeleteThanks! I knew the Aussies would be ready for FridayFlash on Thursday!
ReplyDeleteNot much into the genre, but this reads well. :)
ReplyDeleteOh the lengths to which a root of bitterness will grow. Well done, Laura.
ReplyDeleteHahah! Nice! Here I was wondering what country or tribe or clan or whatever was fighting, then come to find out we're dealing with potential alien races and such. Good twist, and an education to those that think we will be received "peacefully" in outer space when we can't even exist peacefully here.
ReplyDeleteI like how you contrast life before and after the Overlord takeover, yet some things have improved -- there is no lack of food or clothing. I also like how Jessica learned of life before the Overlords from the complaints of the old ones lamenting their lost conveniences. It's almost like they deserved what the Overlords did. Then, of course, there's revenge ...
ReplyDeleteSome lovely word pictures here, Laura. You made that well-described thrust of the knife very satisfying.
ReplyDeletea great way to start the day,Laura.I love resistance, nice work.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed every word. Your world building is superb.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this. You have some really powerful sentences in there and I love how the ending gave me a surprising answer to the big question I had! Thank you for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteNice job, Laura. You tease us, all along the way. Then we learn the sorry truth of it. Hi, we're form the Federation and we're here to help. :o
ReplyDeleteThe one thing that struck me (neither good nor bad) was the name of the MC. Opens the piece up to some interesting speculation. Very Earth centric name, yet no knowledge of Earth. This fascinates me. A former Earth colony long abandoned and now refound? Settlers from an Earth long ago taken over by the Overlords? Lots of possibilities running through my head.
I like the world you've built here, and see seeds of bigger things.
~jon
I agree with Jon about the name of your main character. Is this the name given her by her Federation oppressors? That would provide further depth to the imperialism.
ReplyDeleteLiked the twist and the p.o.v. was handled well here. Her resentment toward her own people and their lack of action powers the story nicely.
Oh yes! Nice one Laura.
ReplyDeleteJessica's contempt for the "sheep" and her sense of herself as hunter are wonderfully brought out - but without the reader being "told".
Very well done. And I enjoyed the reversal of the reader's expectation at the end.
Hah! Loved the twist at the end. ;) Nice work.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line: "The swaths of destruction in the city beyond lay fallow, silent graveyards attesting to the absolute power of the diabolical soldiers."
ReplyDeleteI've been reading a lot of apocalyptic-sort of fiction lately, so this line really struck a nerve with me.