Thursday, May 19, 2011
Mirror, Mirror - #FridayFlash
I haven’t told this story to anyone else but you seem nice enough. Maybe you’ll understand. At any rate, it’s time I told the truth.
You see, I’m not from your world. I know you find that hard to believe but just hear me out before you make any judgment.
It all started with the mirror. I was going through the piles of junk, looking for anything useful to trade – or eat – food being one of the highest commodities on my world. The sun was just breaking the horizon. That’s a good time to hunt. The gangs tend to sleep later so I’ve learned to rise early.
The first rays hit something in the rubble, something shiny that caught my eye. I dug through the layers hiding it and found a mirror. By some miracle it was unbroken, with a large gilded frame surrounding it.
As I tried to wipe the grime away, my arm fell through the plate of glass. Not breaking it, mind you, but through. I was so startled that I dropped the mirror onto the ground. I lost my balance and fell on top of it. Instead of lying there in the dirt and garbage though, it shimmered silvery and I passed right through it.
Well, I ended up in what you call an antiques store with my back to that same mirror. The proprietor came around the corner right then and looked at me in disgust. He hadn’t seen me come through. All he saw was a grimy girl sitting on his floor. The guy called me a bum and told me to get out, giving me a shove for good measure as he opened the door.
That’s when I really understood that I wasn’t home anymore. The buildings and sidewalks that you have…well, there’s nothing like them where I come from.
Anyway, I’m sitting on the sidewalk, my mouth gaping open trying to take it all in, when Frankie walks up to me. He sizes me up right away as someone who needs a friend, or at least a meal. I don’t know anything about your world at this point, so I fall for his friendly routine. I’ve never had someone be so nice to me before so I guess I can be excused on that part. Besides, I’m never going to turn down an offer of food.
After I’ve finished eating food out of a paper sack, Frankie gets me to tell him my story. I don’t know whether he believed me or not, but he got a thoughtful look on his face. He dragged me back to that store and ignored the man who said I couldn’t come in saying, “She’s with me.” I didn’t understand why at the time, but that shut the guy up.
“Is this the mirror?” Frankie had a hold of my arm or I would have bolted. I could see through it, right into my own world, a place I never wanted to go back to. I nodded, afraid to say anything. I thought he was going to push me back home.
Instead, he bought it, telling the owner where to have it delivered. He brought me to this place; called it an apartment. It was the most gorgeous space I’d ever seen, something only officials would live in. By the time I’d gotten out of the shower and dressed, choosing from the closet full of beautiful clothes he had, the mirror had been delivered.
I cringed at the sight of it. That pleased Frankie somehow. He forced me over to it, watching the terrified look on my face as he forced my arm through it. He laid his hand flat against the silvery surface, as though demonstrating his superiority.
“That’s some wild story you’ve told but it looks like it’s true, at least for you. If you don’t want to go back, you’ll do what I tell you.”
What could I say? I watched those eyes of his narrow, becoming mean and shifty. He suddenly reminded me of the worst of the gang leaders, the one I used to run stuff for in order to stay alive. I guess in some ways your world isn’t much different from mine. I nodded, wondering what he wanted.
“That’s a good girl.” His grip on my arm loosened. “Sit down here and let me tell you what you’re going to be doing for me.”
After telling me what my duties would be in exchange for his kindness, I decided that he really didn’t deserve to walk this earth.
Looking back on it, I have to wonder why he never once asked me what kind of skills I possessed. Maybe since I didn’t say much he just assumed that I couldn’t do much. He really should have taken the time to learn more about me though. Poor Frankie thought he could fly by the time he climbed up onto the roof.
You see, my world isn’t a parallel of yours even though we may look the same. We have abilities that you might call mind control. Your people don’t know anything about mental blocks to guard against it, either. You might want to correct that before any more of my kind show up. Some of them aren’t as congenial as I am.
Story first appeared in Pow Fast Flash Fiction, Jan 2010
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I have the terrible trait of talking back to narrators.
ReplyDelete"You see, I’m not from your world. I know you find that hard to believe but just hear me out before you make any judgment. "
John says, "No, I buy it. Go on."
He'd say the same if you said you were a Mormon, suicidal bank investor or gorgon. Though, he might look away if you said you were a gorgon.
I imagine plenty of folks aren't as civil as this alien. I'd happily share tea with it//him/her.
Thank you, Your writing has helped me,,
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great - lesson - be nice not mean! what she could have done for him if he had been kindly well - conquer the world or something!!
ReplyDeletewell done
Love it! Says a lot that someone would try and take advantage of someone so obviously bewildered...so really, he got what he deserved.
ReplyDeleteWhat a quirky little story with a big lesson. Love it.
ReplyDeleteI was entranced the entire way through!
ReplyDeleteThis is vintage Laura. Just goes to show always be nice you never know who or what you are dealing with.
ReplyDeleteTo bad she couldn't just sent him back to her world.
I especially liked the beginning - so mysterious. And I'm always impressed at the consistency of your vision, you always deliver a "shift in dimensions."
ReplyDeleteLove the twist at the end and it left me wanting to hear more of her story here on this side of the mirror.
ReplyDeleteI really like the plot in this, and the character’s a great one. I think you could lop off the first two graphs and get me into it right away. Thanks for the story!
ReplyDeleteI loved this and the twist at the end. Stunning!
ReplyDeleteEllie Garratt
It seemed like out of the frying pan and into the fire for our poor heroine at first, great twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteLaura, I LOVE the suspenseful eerieness of her voice in this! There's a calmness about it that makes the whole story more chilling. Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteI love this story. I wonder what she did with the mirror?
ReplyDeleteAnother great story. Really liked the conceit of this and the resolution...
ReplyDelete"...You might want to correct that before any more of my kind show up..."
ReplyDeleteBeautifully cool deadpan to this.
I'm guessing your MC is going to do very well for herself here. I am mildly concerned for the person she decided to tell her story to. Who knows? He or she may decide she can fly after hearing the full story.
Great story, Laura.
I really liked this story, especially the fact that you dismissed the parallel world thing. Where did the mirrors came from, though?
ReplyDeleteWhat a great little story and a lesson that one shouldn't take a book by its cover.
ReplyDeleteI thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
Helen - helen-scribbles.com
Hi Laura. Great to be reading your friday flash again. This is certainly taking us to another dimension - or did it?
ReplyDeleteDenise<3
http://flashquake.blogspot.com for my #fridayflash
Laura, so glad you posted this. I didn't catch it the first time around... This said sooo much.
ReplyDeleteThank you all! I'm glad you enjoyed my cautionary tale. ;)
ReplyDeleteI loved this story, it really reached me.
ReplyDeleteLaura, Laura are you home???
ReplyDeleteI know your busy. Just wanted to stop and say hi, and I finally posted another story. Check it out if you have time.
Pamela Jo
http://theresjustlifeyaliveit.blogspot.com
Sorry I've been so quiet lately! I will have great news very soon...Tempest Child will hit Amazon in a few days!
ReplyDeleteAt first, the connection with Franky reminded me of Dodger in Oliver Twist. A pleasant twist at the end of this one, too, to find out our little narrator isn't as feeble. Well done, Laura.
ReplyDeleteNow that was an awesome Flash friday post! Stupid Frankie. LEsson number one (not that it matters to him anymore) Never under estimate your opponent!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Stephen and Stephen! :) I'm glad you both enjoyed my little tale.
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